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2:36, new york city, i can

imagine you
looking out your window,
watching the cars pass by instead of the waves, and

something isn't right, because there's ocean in your blood and
i anchor you.





love,
you still believe in the girl i used to be, but
she's been gone longer than this white sky summer.
i wish i wish i wish but i have nothing to wish on instead of crumpled papers, words that'll never be good enough to close the distance between us
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Ashbrie13 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
*hugs*
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student Writer
:huggle:
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Ashbrie13 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Tackling hug 
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Student Writer
Lol.
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Nyuuh Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
"there's ocean in your blood and
i anchor you."

Those lines really caught my attention. And my feelings too.
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student Writer
<3
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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: 
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Writer
:heart::heart::heart:
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yiyao00 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist
Very beautiful ! I like it!
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! :hug:
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QuirkyPoetress Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is just so beautiful and simple <3
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Writer
:heart: thank you.
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QuirkyPoetress Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome :)
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is really good simple and elegant and I feel the longing
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Writer
I feel it too. Haha, but thank you very much for your feedback.
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Of course!
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Writer
<3
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
very moving!
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much.
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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green-pawprint Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
I don't know how you can possibly be this awesome!  (Take that as a compliment)
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Writer
Wow. Lol. Thanks!
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AuthorKatieOlson Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Writer
The last few lines definitely express agony to me. This is really pretty in a sad way. Also I like how you introduced the poem with the time and city. :)
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much for the feedback. :heart:
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AuthorKatieOlson Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Student Writer
You are quite welcome! :heart: 
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