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Sing to the darkness of the night sky

in hopes that the    stars    

                will shine brighter


I don't really know what to put here :XD:
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:iconcyanidebrighteyes:
This poem amazes me.
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RoseScarlet Jun 4, 2013  Student Writer
Aww thank you! It's one of my favorites too! <3
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shehrozeameen Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this poem itself is a good written word, but it can be improved by using html codes.

use italics in "sing" and bold underline for "darkness"

use the tt code for "stars"

in the artist description... write about what you felt when you were writing this work; what were you feeling; what made you happy; who were you thinking about; anything really...
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RoseScarlet Apr 9, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you for the advice.
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shehrozeameen Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome for it.
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:icondarksonicsoul:
Short yet beautiful!
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RoseScarlet Apr 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you^^
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