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Sing to the darkness of the night sky

in hopes that the    stars    

                will shine brighter


I don't really know what to put here :XD:
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cyanidebrighteyes Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013
This poem amazes me.
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student Writer
Aww thank you! It's one of my favorites too! <3
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this poem itself is a good written word, but it can be improved by using html codes.

use italics in "sing" and bold underline for "darkness"

use the tt code for "stars"

in the artist description... write about what you felt when you were writing this work; what were you feeling; what made you happy; who were you thinking about; anything really...
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you for the advice.
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome for it.
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darksonicsoul Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Short yet beautiful!
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you^^
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darksonicsoul Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Your welcome! :3
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Student Writer
^^
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darksonicsoul Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
:3
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Student Writer
^^
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darksonicsoul Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
Hehe
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student Writer
heehee
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SweetAndSourLollipop Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Even as it's only 3 lines, it's so beautiful <3 It sounds like something a mother would tell her child every night~ to never give up and always follow their dreams even when it might be hard.
Though, I may be looking too far into this ^^; It's lovely, I adore this.
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! <3
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SweetAndSourLollipop Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
My pleasure! <3 >v<
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Student Writer
^^
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lexitaylor670 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i like this :) i think its good how it can be interpreted in many different ways :P
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you^^
In what ways, may I ask? :D
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lexitaylor670 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
the way i interpreted it is even though you (general) may be going through a rough time (darkness), it will eventually get better (shine brighter). others may see it differently e.g. quite literally by what it says
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student Writer
Ah. Thank you for clarifying :giggle:
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