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poetry or just poetic by CorporalCornbread


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and i wonder what it feels like to be


alive.
-I don't know.
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! I've chosen you as the 148th person for my 200 Comments Project Challenge. Basically I'm giving comments to 200 different people in a time frame within a week :D (Big Grin)

I think all of us must have thought this at times in our lives. I think what makes us feel alive is doing something that we're passionate about and also enjoy doing. I really love how your poem is opened up to various meanings depending on the reader's perception. Very well done!
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Student Writer
thank you very much for reading!
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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NuminousNocturne Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is superb. Poetry is a window, the merest glimpse, into the soul of another. This simple, elegant poem reflects this beautifully.  This poem is magical. Thank you for writing it.
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student Writer
thank you so much for your wonderful comment!
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Seabit Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just two lines, but whoa.
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Student Writer
<3 thanks.
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Seabit Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You´re welcome!! :heart:
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Student Writer
:heart:
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wait for it. it comes.
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